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               boy fishing
            
1. a) Mom and Dad packed the car for camping.
                b) Put the camping gear in the trunk.
                c) Bobby put in his fishing pole.
                d) I brought my games and toys.

         2.a) We rode for hours in the car.
               
b) Sitting in the back seat for a long time.
                c) My games and toys kept me busy.
                d) The hours passed by quickly.

         3.a) Excited and happy to be at the camp!
               
b) I always enjoy camping.
                c) Bobby just loves to fish!
                d) He couldn't wait to get to the lake.

         4.a) Bobby took his fishing pole down to the dock.
               
b) He put the bait onto the hook.
                c) The pole with the baited hook.
                d) Fish were jumping in the water below.

         5.a) Suddenly he felt a tug on the line!
               
b) The huge wiggly fish.
                c) He pulled the fish from the water.
                d) Bobby was very happy!

 

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