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          Paul and his dad were planning their first fishing trip of the year.

        "What should I pack, Dad?" said Paul.  "I don't want to forget anything."

        "Just bring your pole, Paul.  I've got everything else we'll need already in the car," said Dad.  "Mom's already packed us a big lunch.  We want to get an early start!"

        "Should I bring a sweatshirt?" questioned Paul.

        "Oh, it's always cool in the morning near the lake.  You'll need more than a sweatshirt.  You need to make sure you dress warm."

        Paul headed up to bed.  "I don't think I'll be able to sleep, Dad.  I'm too excited!"

 

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